Minor grammatical changes

diff --git a/slides.rst b/slides.rst
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@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@ most places and the following common scenario:
 
 #. User registers an account with a careless service, eg Facebook, Yahoo,
    Google, Equifax etc. etc.
-#. The service is hacked and the password database is leaked
-#. The hacker logs in to the email accounts
+#. The service is hacked and the password and email is leaked
+#. The hacker logs in to the email account
 #. The hacker resets passwords on all important accounts tied to that email 
    address
 
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ Passphrases are better than passwords:
 * Tr0ub4dor&3 -> 28 bits of entropy, hard to remember
 * correct horse battery stable -> 44 bits of entropy, easy to remember
 
-Use passphrases everywhere you have to remember.
+If you have to remember it, use a passphrase.
 
 Generate passphrases with Diceware
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